Production: Second draft

Here is my second draft of my documentary, there are still changes I am planning on making but I also send this to my target audience and gained feedback below which I will make amendments on their responses before finishing the documentary.

Documentary 2 from Katie Pearl on Vimeo.

Re-film the shot with the presenter, Cassie, introducing the documentary as you can hear a car driving past.

Make the introduction look busier to reflect the words of the voiceover.

Change the font of the statistics so the documentary has continuity.

Re arrange the cutaways in the interview with the coffee shop owner in Leigh.

Add a Channel 4 introduction